Last week's freeXpressions prompt was Misty:
which prompted these haikus:
a road to nowhere
doesn’t exist, except to
the town of Nowhere
cloud sits on mountain
gingerly, cautiously
the peak is pointy
cold rocky shoreline
overlooked by stark mountains
topped with mist
slow moving black flood
green grows up in the sun
black oozes down
Bilbo, use the road
travel hours, not months
to misty mountains
get in the water
you’ll feel more numb than cold
trust me
enter the mist
alternate universes
may be beyond
dank, drear, heavy
grey, overcast, cold, and wet
a sunny day here
road follows the coast
power lines follow the road
what’s the coast follow?
and then I wrote this microfiction:
Archibald Simmons von Smith was once asked to write a symphony that would set the landscape of Moldovania’s coast to music. Getting on in years, he was unable to compose on location; a series of reference photos were provided instead. He studied the photos intently, wanting to express, above all, truth.
The first movement was for the mountains and the cloud-covered peaks. It soared and towered, and yet was also mysterious and airy. Listeners agreed it was a masterwork.
The second movement described the waters, the waves, the storms. You could feel rains pouring down, lashing the unmoving cliffs, and yet also the nurturing of lush vegetation. Listeners agreed it too was a masterwork.
The third and last movement described the scar of a road that cut through the coastal beauty. Coming in at roughly four and a half minutes, listeners agreed it was four and a half minutes too long and described the road too well.
The road was torn out and nature allowed to repair itself.
Archibald’s top student was then commissioned to write another version of the symphony. After being paid fully in advance, he took the original symphony and ripped up the third movement, leaving everything else intact.
While the music is a masterpiece, the lawsuit concerning the artist’s fee is still being adjudicated.
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